Thursday, 30 June 2016

Myths and legends

W.A.L.T be storytellers
Tis is my story about a Dimond and Neptune it's not true but there is 1 fact about Neptune, I made this story.
Feed back:good job Jamie you are really good at working  
Feed forward:you can make your story's more interesting 
Yellow target I need to work on make my story's longer.
In 1766 Neptune was raining Dimonds if you did not not know that Neptune rains Dimonds, it does ( fact right at the start) so yeah. Anyway there was a black hole right by Neptune, the black hole shot the Dimond out of Neptune, the Dimond was going 4.60 km right towards earth. But the Dimond hit part of the Milky Way and there was a loud crash, the force even moved earth. The Dimond was split into four across the sky, and they look like stars, but these 'stars' is the Dimond from Neptune.

Wednesday, 29 June 2016

Pae Tamariki

On the 28 of june we went to the regent and did kapa haka, here is a couple of photos. .

Sports start

W.A.L.T striking and fielding.
We played this game named MAKE A CHOICE, its like baseball. If your batter you make a choice to run, If you just run once you get 1 POINT, if you run twice you get 2 POINTS and so on. If the fielder gives the ball to the baller and the batter is running your out and even if you scored ten points you lose them.
Feed back... it looks great.
Feed forward... there is nothing bad about it.



Monday, 27 June 2016

Maori

W.A.L.T make a story in Maori.
Here is my story in Maori, there is 2 posts, this is the second one.
Feedback...Great job Jamie I like the minion
Feedforward... I don't know what to write because it was all good, Jai.
Green target.







Sunday, 26 June 2016

Maori, tikina he

W.A.L.T write a story in Maori.
Here is my story in Maori, it is with Gru and minion. There is 2 posts, this is the 1st one.

Feedback: You done an amazing job well done Jamie.
Feedforward: Next time you could try and have more description.
From Izzy.
Green target,










Tuesday, 21 June 2016

reading, retell our own story.

W.A.L.T write a story in our own words.
This story is made by Maddie ross.
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Monday, 20 June 2016

Maths, find out the area.

W.a.l.t  find out the area of these shapes.
We all got three sheets and we have to figure out biggest to smallest, I worked with Fyfe, the photos are in Order, the photo will go first then the writing.
Yellow target, my photos are blurry.




Wednesday, 8 June 2016

Jupiter Questions

W.a.l.t ask our own Questions about space.
Here is some of my work about Jupiter I have more work to come.
Feed back....I think your models great and you got a ten out of ten
Feedforward...I think your plan could be better
Green target.