Tuesday, 31 March 2015

Last pattern

This is a basketball hoop and you may not be able to see it.

Thursday, 26 March 2015

Writing - WALT write a recount about the marae trip!

W.A.L.T write a recount
Success criteria

Are the events in time order? E.g.

We met in the hall...I was waving out to the children as the bus sped off down the road...When we arrived at the Marae, we patiently waited at the gate ... After the pƍwhiri I was busting to go to the toilet...

Is it in the past tenseE.g. Was, left, woke up, etc


Does it use time connectives?
e.g. next, meanwhile, within hours, soon afterwards, weeks later, etc.

Does it use powerful verbs? Powerful verbs can make your writing much much more exciting and dramatic!!

E.g. Grabbed          snatched           sprinted         scrambled          shouted         screamed     crawled     leapt          strode          yelled            exclaimed         glared



Is the last line linked to the introduction / does it have a good conclusion?



W.a.l. Te reo Maori

Wednesday, 11 March 2015

Oger style

We had to think of a good act this was on Percy Jackson sea of monsters