W.A.L.T write a recount
Are the events in time order? E.g.
We met in the hall...I was waving out to the children as the bus sped off down the road...When we arrived at the Marae, we patiently waited at the gate ... After the pōwhiri I was busting to go to the toilet...
Is it in the past tense? E.g. Was, left, woke up, etc
Does it use time connectives?
e.g. next, meanwhile, within hours, soon afterwards, weeks later, etc.
Does it use powerful verbs? Powerful verbs can make your writing much much more exciting and dramatic!!
E.g. Grabbed snatched sprinted scrambled shouted screamed crawled leapt strode yelled exclaimed glared
Is the last line linked to the introduction / does it have a good conclusion?